Hi everyone
This is lockdown learning and this is my pome about junk hope you enjoy and see if I have rhymed properly
By Cass Ryan
Wednesday, August 25, 2021
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Wonderful work Cass! I have seen that you have used descriptive words and words that make you feel hooked to this poem. You have thought this poem through and have worked really hard on it! You have done very well with this poem. Maybe next time you could mix the words up? And arrange them to make your poem sound different? Anyways... Well done!
ReplyDeletethanks brooklyn (:
DeleteWow Cass! I love your poem, it has lots of rhyming and descriptive words that keep in moving along at a great pace! You have used emotive language too, like 'glare' and 'revolting', and even a question or two to make me think about my own reaction to the terrible situation. I am left in no doubt as to YOUR feelings about it, that's for sure! Congratulations
ReplyDeletethanks rachel
DeleteWell-done, Cass. You express strong feelings of disgust and even anger at all the rubbish and junk.
ReplyDeleteyeah it was a very fun activity
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