Sunday, April 26, 2020
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Lovely poem, Cass. I enjoyed your descriptive language and the imagery of the Manu Tukutuku being like a bird. Ka Pai! 😍
ReplyDeleteI am also wondering if you could tell us a little about this poem and what you learnt and why you did it?
DeleteI love your descriptive language too Cass! I can picture that kite up in the sky moving around as you have described.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your poem, especially the three verbs describing the kite's movement. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteHi Cass. This is a lovely poem. You could try some more on your own, eg you focus on one object or feeling and then you think of 2 or 3 verbs or adjectves that you associate with it and you shape this on the page in the way that seems most appropriate to you. How about trying 'grandma'? and sending it to me.
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