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Friday, August 14, 2020

Puppies

Hi everyone,
In class, this term we are focus on animals. 
Mrs. Hall did part one of abandon story and Libby and I wrote part 2 part 3 part 4 we really enjoyed doing this and lucky we will probably be doing more next week I will try to be braver when we shear our ideas. It is fun learning about animals.
By Cass


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3 comments:

  1. Malia CousinsAugust 24, 2020 at 10:29 AM

    wow Cass that is some good narrative writing I like how you put detail into your writing. for next time do not write the eye of the witness it does on make much sence

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    1. Malia CousinsAugust 24, 2020 at 2:04 PM

      thanks for changing it another new error is noke noke when actually is knock knock

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  2. ChristaSeptember 3, 2020 at 4:39 AM

    The eye witness section reads like part of a play: well done Cass and Libby!

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