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Monday, July 22, 2019

Why are there so many of us needing a home?

Hello I'm Cass.

WOW I can't believe it. 10 weeks went so fast. All ready its the end of term 2 that means its the SCIENCE FAIR! Our teacher said we could do posters as well as a project.I had my idea straight away. I got the idea from a movie I watched about dogs. I decided to call it don`t buy from breeders.  We went on to piktochart and wrote our problem and solution i wrote so much problem i had no roam for solution i had to make my writing smaller to fit it in.

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9 comments:

  1. RylieJuly 29, 2019 at 9:42 AM

    Wow Cass I love your post it's really interesting. Cass just saying you've
    got some words wrong.

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  2. Anna SJuly 29, 2019 at 9:50 AM

    Hello Cass your blog is amazing. That's about as much writing as I did. I think you should of edited it first and went up to Mr Milne

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  3. EilidhJuly 29, 2019 at 10:06 AM

    Wow I never knew that the breeders keep't the dogs in cages that small. I din't know that you could write like that.

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  4. LibbyJuly 29, 2019 at 10:21 AM

    Hi,
    Your post is great. I really like how you thought about the animals and there health. Your post really reminded me of when went into a pet shop and saw lots of unhappy animals. Maybe next time you could check your punctuation but apart from that I loved it.

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  5. Steph TempleJuly 29, 2019 at 8:17 PM

    Hi Cass.I'm really impressed at your eagerness to share your learning.I think you could possibly slow down a little and re-read your writing, but overall I think this is great!

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  6. ChristaJuly 29, 2019 at 9:38 PM

    Hi Cass. I've just been able to open and read your poster and I'm really impressed by your concern about dogs from breeders.It's so nice that you can share your ideas this way. It's also a good way to look at your writing from the language point of view , ie how can I improve my spelling , punctuation , grammar.
    Well-done, Cass! I'm looking forward to your next blog. xx oma

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  7. UnknownJuly 30, 2019 at 10:01 AM

    Hi Cassarina! Wow that is amazing work, I'm pleased that because of your caring nature you go out & try to change things for the better, go you!
    It is good however, to know that not all breeders are unscrupulous, some do everything they can to assure their animals well being.These are the ones we can buy our dogs from with confidence.
    Love Nanny

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    1. CASS RYAN RULESSeptember 9, 2019 at 10:05 AM

      HI Nana its Cass thank you for comenting on my blog i throw i should be nice to the animals love cass

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